I love this demo! Like holy heck I am in love with how Jack was written, that subtle manipulation??? How he can word his words just right to the point I am falling for it? Not only that but his dialogue is making me want to kick and scream, but the end part gave me the most chills because for a moment I truly forgot Jack and he won't like that at all. Wonderful game, like my god wonderful game!!! Kudos to everyone on the team for making this a reality~~~!
I love how you can tell how manipulative Jack is almost minutes into the game and the jealously! Ohhhh, it was just DRIPPING from his voice! Can't wait for the full release! <3
In my opinion, I think the grammar could be run over with a fine tooth comb, at least for the flavor text portion/main character's thoughts/descriptions. When your game is text based its important to have really tight writing. I think it could benefit from some quick editing, like replacing words that have been used twice in a row, and working some sentences out to flow better. Also, I'm not sure if this was purposeful, but when changing sprites, the quick half-fade between changes before the character comes back was a little distracting and messed with my eyes a bit. I'm not sure if anyone else had this problem, or if this is even fixable or done on purpose or what.
That said, this game's strong suit is the dialogue of the other characters. It's very focused, while giving the characters a lot of personality in only a few words. It's subtle, but it has a lot of charm and it made me play again right after finishing. The VA crew is talented as well, and brings a lot of life to the characters too. The scares were pretty decent too, and gave a real sense of creeping dread the longer time went on, with so many subtle clues on top of the more obvious ones that added to the suspense. I like that it doesn't give you all the answers right away, and the writer didn't fall into the trap of telling everything right away. The art is great as well; the style is appealing and the character designs are great as well. As a background artist myself, I think the backgrounds were well made as well.
I'm really excited to see where this goes in the future. It's clear that the creator is very talented so I can't wait to see what they do in the future!
It is simply fantastic, and it has several aspects that erotic horror visual novels do not usually have, simply with the demo it already manages to hook you in some way, I am anxious for the release of the rest of the game
As far as Demos go this was a solid 10/10 for me. Gives you a look at the characters and the vibe the game as a whole. I also really like how it already shows you that your choices matter beyond just being a few different lines of text.
The fact that you can tell that the small horror vibes your getting are just the tip of the iceberg make me more than excited to see just how far things will go.
As far as the game as a whole goes the concept is very interesting to me. I'm really looking forward to seeing how each approach to dealing with Jack plays out. That in mind it'll also be neat to see how your relationship with other characters plays out.
so for anyone on the fence I highly recommend giving the demo a shot.
Okay. The ending for the demo is just... CLIFFHANGER!! I NEED to know what happens! He sounds so much like a yandere, and I LOVE IT!!Not only that, but he is such a caring figure in the MCs life that honestly, makes me wanna keep coming back for more! If I had money, I would 100% give you a donation for the game. Fuck it. My next pay check, I will give you 50. Thats how good the game is! I LOOK FORWARD TO THE COMPLETE GAME SOME DAY!!!
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I need to just... Articulate how deeply I'm in love with this game. The backgrounds? Immaculate. The designs? Absolutely stellar. The voice acting? Amazing! The Writing? Bro it's so phenomenal I can't put into WORDS how much I adore just how silver-tongued Jack is in each and every route... Seeing how the choices you make deeply affect not only the MC but affect Jack and how he talks to you? UGH I'd give anything to experience it for the first time again.
I feel Jack is such a character catered to people who love praise and you HIT THE NAIL ON THE HEAD! He's such a perfect blend of someone so innocent and somebody so sinister even on a surface level, no blood or murder required! He's such a perfect blend and He's exactly everything I could have wanted in a yandere-like character and I can't wait for more of him! (I will wait, it'll be so worth it!)
Even though he appeared briefly, I'm also so in love with Shaun! Even with only a few lines of dialogue, the relationship he has with the MC feels so real, and damn I may have only heard him say a few things compared to Jack but gosh!! I feel like I've known him for years! He's so charming in the way only an old buddy can be and I also look forward to seeing more of him!
(Final note before I wrap this all up, the audio dramas are stellar! Thank you sooo much for this delicious content, It's all I could have wanted!)
But overall, such a phenomenal demo, and so sizable too! I'd love nothing more than to support the full project, and I hope you have a delightful day, you lovely, lovely people!
Nothing's Wrong With Sunny Day Jack, he's a perfect husband, honestly I'd have caved in even faster than we can as the player character, I'd have told him I loved him during that first scene on the couch if it let me!
To my knowledge, I just don't think the demo is playable on Mac; maybe if you have a device that has Windows, it could work but I'm not all that tech savvy lol
Oh I'm so heartbroken, you cliffhanging sadists....Lol I seriously can't wait to see more of this. The art style, the storyline, everything about it is amazing. Bravo!
Though i'll have to do another playthrough with the sound actually ON this time cuz yeah... ^///^;; I noticed the voice acting was a little too good, so I might have chickened out and minimized the volume mid-story...
Wow that was really great! I cannot WAIT to see where this goes and I am very excited for the full release! The voice acting was a great touch. (Also, the praise... YES.) I hope it comes out soon haha because I am already obsessed and there is like NO content (fanart/fanfics) out there to quench my thirst for this game. Anyays, thank you so much for this game!
Interesting plot, just the demo and I'm already loving Jack (and his voice eee) I'm looking forward for the full version!
edit: The full demo was amazing!! Jack is dangerous, he's meeting all of my standards arghh! Gosh I can't wait for the full version and for things to get fucked up and scary (and steamy)
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DUDE THIS GAME GOT ME HORNY THIS IS THE BEST NSFW GAME EVER
is there a version for mobile by any chance?
Ughhhh i so want to play but I only have a phone mobile version when? lol
I love this demo! Like holy heck I am in love with how Jack was written, that subtle manipulation??? How he can word his words just right to the point I am falling for it? Not only that but his dialogue is making me want to kick and scream, but the end part gave me the most chills because for a moment I truly forgot Jack and he won't like that at all. Wonderful game, like my god wonderful game!!! Kudos to everyone on the team for making this a reality~~~!
I love how you can tell how manipulative Jack is almost minutes into the game and the jealously! Ohhhh, it was just DRIPPING from his voice! Can't wait for the full release! <3
In my opinion, I think the grammar could be run over with a fine tooth comb, at least for the flavor text portion/main character's thoughts/descriptions. When your game is text based its important to have really tight writing. I think it could benefit from some quick editing, like replacing words that have been used twice in a row, and working some sentences out to flow better. Also, I'm not sure if this was purposeful, but when changing sprites, the quick half-fade between changes before the character comes back was a little distracting and messed with my eyes a bit. I'm not sure if anyone else had this problem, or if this is even fixable or done on purpose or what.
That said, this game's strong suit is the dialogue of the other characters. It's very focused, while giving the characters a lot of personality in only a few words. It's subtle, but it has a lot of charm and it made me play again right after finishing. The VA crew is talented as well, and brings a lot of life to the characters too. The scares were pretty decent too, and gave a real sense of creeping dread the longer time went on, with so many subtle clues on top of the more obvious ones that added to the suspense. I like that it doesn't give you all the answers right away, and the writer didn't fall into the trap of telling everything right away. The art is great as well; the style is appealing and the character designs are great as well. As a background artist myself, I think the backgrounds were well made as well.
I'm really excited to see where this goes in the future. It's clear that the creator is very talented so I can't wait to see what they do in the future!
Me, getting to the end of the demo: Haha I'm in danger :)
but yeah this was really great! can't wait to see more!!
ooh wow this game is something else. I really like it, but that cliffhanger was something illegal. I would love to see more of this game ;)
The game looks very interesting!
But could you add a 32bit version for those who have a blender pls? qq
Oh hey, absolutely loved your game!
If you are interested in this game being translated, I could offer myself for the spanish one <3
As far as Demos go this was a solid 10/10 for me. Gives you a look at the characters and the vibe the game as a whole. I also really like how it already shows you that your choices matter beyond just being a few different lines of text.
The fact that you can tell that the small horror vibes your getting are just the tip of the iceberg make me more than excited to see just how far things will go.
As far as the game as a whole goes the concept is very interesting to me. I'm really looking forward to seeing how each approach to dealing with Jack plays out. That in mind it'll also be neat to see how your relationship with other characters plays out.
so for anyone on the fence I highly recommend giving the demo a shot.
The voice acting is sooo good!!! I am seriously super invested in the story so far. I literally can't wait for more! <3<3<3
himbos and praise are my weaknessI want more pls gimme more.
Got this recommended to me today, and it was amazing. Like, the demo did it's job, I'm hooked!!
The accompanying audio and video were choice, very cool, very fun, I'm feeling very normal asdfdsadf
i try to play the demo and its all black.the video works but not the game sadly
This game is amazing! Looking forward to playing more! That cliffhanger was too much, keep up the amazing work!
ahhh this was soooooo good I loved it
this game was so good. can't wait to play more.
Okay. The ending for the demo is just... CLIFFHANGER!! I NEED to know what happens! He sounds so much like a yandere, and I LOVE IT!!Not only that, but he is such a caring figure in the MCs life that honestly, makes me wanna keep coming back for more! If I had money, I would 100% give you a donation for the game. Fuck it. My next pay check, I will give you 50. Thats how good the game is! I LOOK FORWARD TO THE COMPLETE GAME SOME DAY!!!
I love this...this is amazing...your work us amazing...just everything is amazing
make it available for macccc
Oh no! My only weakness! Having someone care about me!! In all seriosness (please excuse my spelling) I love this game.
Anybody have recommendations for more games like this? With smut, of course ;]
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I need to just... Articulate how deeply I'm in love with this game. The backgrounds? Immaculate. The designs? Absolutely stellar. The voice acting? Amazing! The Writing? Bro it's so phenomenal I can't put into WORDS how much I adore just how silver-tongued Jack is in each and every route... Seeing how the choices you make deeply affect not only the MC but affect Jack and how he talks to you? UGH I'd give anything to experience it for the first time again.
I feel Jack is such a character catered to people who love praise and you HIT THE NAIL ON THE HEAD! He's such a perfect blend of someone so innocent and somebody so sinister even on a surface level, no blood or murder required! He's such a perfect blend and He's exactly everything I could have wanted in a yandere-like character and I can't wait for more of him! (I will wait, it'll be so worth it!)
Even though he appeared briefly, I'm also so in love with Shaun! Even with only a few lines of dialogue, the relationship he has with the MC feels so real, and damn I may have only heard him say a few things compared to Jack but gosh!! I feel like I've known him for years! He's so charming in the way only an old buddy can be and I also look forward to seeing more of him!
(Final note before I wrap this all up, the audio dramas are stellar! Thank you sooo much for this delicious content, It's all I could have wanted!)
But overall, such a phenomenal demo, and so sizable too! I'd love nothing more than to support the full project, and I hope you have a delightful day, you lovely, lovely people!
Really really enjoyed this one, it stands out. I got super invested in such a short amount of time. looking forward to more!
Edit:also really really enjoyed the voice acting, rare enough for me!
oops fell in love!
Nothing's Wrong With Sunny Day Jack, he's a perfect husband, honestly I'd have caved in even faster than we can as the player character, I'd have told him I loved him during that first scene on the couch if it let me!
Just getting a black screen (T~T) I wanna play it so bad
SAME I’m playing on my phone cause I don’t have a computer but if you managed to play it PLZ TELL ME HOW😭
Yeah I'm getting the same problem; I really wanna play ;-;
Same problem as well ;-; Edit: I tried playing it in my browser and it worked!
I’m playing in browser too, but it keeps showing a black screen. Idk if it’s because I have a Mac or something else..
hey I've been dealing with the same problem! Any clue to fix it?
To my knowledge, I just don't think the demo is playable on Mac; maybe if you have a device that has Windows, it could work but I'm not all that tech savvy lol
Oh I'm so heartbroken, you cliffhanging sadists....Lol I seriously can't wait to see more of this. The art style, the storyline, everything about it is amazing. Bravo!
Though i'll have to do another playthrough with the sound actually ON this time cuz yeah... ^///^;; I noticed the voice acting was a little too good, so I might have chickened out and minimized the volume mid-story...
NOOOO I ALMOST CHOKED WHEN THE DEMO ENDED, I WANTED MORE!
It was awesome! I just cannot wait for the full game, I loved Jack, and the voice acting was BEAUTIFUL, I will totally wait for the full game release!
You have your wish; I'm silent on Twitter for the comments made.
When I return, you'll know.
Is there a Mac version of this? I never got an answer from Twitter either before things went sour between....
I just finished this and this seems very promising, i am very interested in the deeper story here with Jack.
Wow that was really great! I cannot WAIT to see where this goes and I am very excited for the full release! The voice acting was a great touch. (Also, the praise... YES.) I hope it comes out soon haha because I am already obsessed and there is like NO content (fanart/fanfics) out there to quench my thirst for this game. Anyays, thank you so much for this game!
This is so good! Jack was so sweet and I found myself engaged in the story pretty quickly. I can’t wait for the next update.
Thank god this is a demo. I thought it was the whole game at first and felt sad, because there wasn't anything more. This is awesome!
Interesting plot, just the demo and I'm already loving Jack (and his voice eee) I'm looking forward for the full version!
edit: The full demo was amazing!! Jack is dangerous, he's meeting all of my standards arghh! Gosh I can't wait for the full version and for things to get fucked up and scary (and steamy)
im so hyped!!! can't wait for the full game!!